The Active Voice Assassin

MISSION BRIEFING: The agency's intelligence reports a massive infiltration of "to-be" verbs (is, are, was, were) and clunky relative clauses (who is, which was) destroying the syntax of our operatives' essays.

YOUR DIRECTIVE: Eradicate passive, wordy sentences. Use Appositive Phrases and Active Verbs to execute clean, sophisticated syntax. Select your mission parameters below.